开头

When asked about xxx,different people might express different opinions. Understandably, a person's attitude is closely related to his values and views of the world. Some viewers prefer XX, while others insist that .
Frankly speaking, I am in favour of the former/latter position.

让步

Admittedly, several defects of this proposal ought to be noted.On the one hand, xxx, which may be . On the other hand, xxx.

转折

However, the program urges teachers to enhance teaching efficiency. Normally, one’s salary is major stimulus to improve the quality of his works. Not only, but also. As long as such pressures function well and are finally turned into impetus, there is every reason to believe that greater efforts will be made.

递进

In addition, students will receive more attention from their teachers because of this motion. The traditional “teacher-centered” mode of teaching allows teacher to rule the classroom by using an approach to teach one curriculum to everyone at the same time.

结尾

As a result, a number of factors ought to be taken into consideration befor such an innovative proposal is finally passed and implemented, but I stil render my support to the notion that teachers can be paid on the basis of their students’ performance.

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